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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-12-10 05:28 PM


god will never let us touch that much
beyond the bad hurt sure want to
something about the good of you

is too lovely to sin that much
and the good of me
is too bad to be blessed that way

so we just keep the windows up
and touch with our eyes
coveting the coveting

and letting our minds run
barefoot in the wickedness
we both wish we could worship

from outside this sigh side prison


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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-11-2007 06:19 AM).]

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-12-10 05:49 PM


I enjoy your poetry A lot

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-12-10 05:56 PM


something about the good of you

is too lovely to sin that much
and the good of me
is too bad to be blessed that way

so we just keep the windows up

now, this I can relate to!  Lovely Mr Daark... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2007-12-10 09:54 PM


artic, thanks so much for the read

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ms R & B, grinz then...thanks lady

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2007-12-10 10:42 PM


well of course this caught my eyes ~


M

Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
5 posted 2007-12-10 10:53 PM


for a second I knew that we knew it all in the 80's....I remember all the no no's and wants....I kept 'em running though....take care....kingsangel

~~~kingsangel~~~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2007-12-10 11:00 PM


sounds like an umbrella
in search of a storm
sad song sung blue, dark blue
love the sighs and the tears of this

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2007-12-11 06:20 AM


ms MMs, thanks babe for the read


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ms angel, thank you for the touch


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ms inky, ladylove you smile me softly, thanks much

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