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RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 126
Oregon

0 posted 2007-12-10 08:16 AM


I've been doing some remodeling for some friends and the bear of it has been moving all of their stuff from one room to the next. They have a lot of stuff. It has however inspired this....

They need shelves - and
     I mean lots of shelves
     to hold all of their stuff.

Four bedrooms and
     a three car garage
     and still there's not enough.

Not enough room
     not enough storage
     they could stock an entire store

But I thank them
     for they've taught me well
     that sometimes less is more
    


© Copyright 2007 John Eyler - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-12-10 12:24 PM


Gosh, did you write this for me?!!

It fits, except me, in my family no one wants to get rid of things ...  

I couldn't agree more with the lesson you learned ... less is more, less gives you the chance to breathe and to maintain order, yes! Feng Shui philosophy is a good thing to follow.

I dream of perfect order, but I wonder when I will reach this ideal.

Enjoyed this greatly! Well done!

Love,
Margherita


RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 126
Oregon
2 posted 2007-12-10 04:09 PM


I'm a bit of a minimalist, having lots of stuff means having lots of stuff to take care of and I think that just takes away from better options one might have.
Just another Pete
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since 2007-12-06
Posts 74
Scotland
3 posted 2007-12-10 06:26 PM


A great truth muchly enjoyed.

Pete

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