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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-12-09 07:48 AM

Now

Captured
in a loss of control,
where time will lend itself
to healing that which has been stolen...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2007-12-09 07:54 AM

interesting view ms...enjoyed your fragile here

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2007-12-09 09:12 AM

That is exactly where I am.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-12-09 11:36 AM

nicely concise 'write!'...

would that 'time' truly possessed such benevolence!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-12-09 11:43 AM

Hope for the better!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2007-12-09 01:10 PM

Dear Maureen, you expressed a truly captivating thought!

Very well done!

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2007-12-09 06:32 PM

short and awesome

I love it!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2007-12-09 07:54 PM

There is a tomorrow, thank goodness....passed the "now." Heal quickly, M-Lady. This is a very powerful, clear snapshot of a moment.......*hugs*.....jo

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2007-12-10 07:27 PM

I'd like to know if you planned the stair-step effect...
I love it!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2007-12-10 09:10 PM

May time be kind to your spirit.
Wonderful write.
(I miss Mark, too!)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2007-12-10 10:14 PM

Thank you...yes "I", I planned the stairstep but only after the words were written and I was deciding whether to make it centered but thought the steps looked better...

but mostly I never plan anything~~ for one thing it never seems to work out the way I expect, so I go with the unplanned plan for now~~

M

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