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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-10-09 05:39 PM


Repost:


Complexity

I drown within complexity
The infinite of small and all
And no matter the starting be
The journey an infinite call

There’s no subject matter I know
With a beginning or end
There’s no matter that’s just so
It is all subject to a bend

It’s relative to time and space
A relative of conscious awe
A pinpoint of time and place
That has no place and has no store

I am a victim of this pain
In search of a vanities goal
I am a victim near insane
That resonates a magic soul

I’ve built a ship to shelter me
For I am truly out at sea.


© Copyright 2007 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-10-09 05:40 PM


nice write.......


ARCTIC WIND

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2007-10-09 05:42 PM


There’s no matter that’s just so
It is all subject to a bend

that's for sure

(been looking for you)



M

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2007-10-09 05:46 PM


It is so good to see you, Seymour. I sure hope you are feeling a whole lot better.
Margherita
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4 posted 2007-10-10 12:36 PM


quote:
I am a victim near insane
That resonates a magic soul

I’ve built a ship to shelter me
For I am truly out at sea.



Absolutely exquisite, dear Seymour!

We should never forget that we are magic souls, whatever!

Love and hugs.
Wishing you to feel fine and full of energy.
Margherita

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2007-10-10 12:59 PM


Hello lovie!

Not only have you been on my mind, but judging by this? You have been in my mind!

simply complex

Kinda like an egg.

And it all starts with an egg. (Or is it the chicken?) Y'see what I mean?

Oy, I have missed you.

TinaTrivett
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6 posted 2007-10-10 01:47 PM


Seymour...I can honestly say that I look forward to each and every poem you write. I might not reply to all, but you can bet your buttons I'm reading.
The Lady
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7 posted 2007-10-12 10:21 PM




"And no matter the starting be
The journey an infinite call"

extremely well put Sir Sy

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2007-10-14 04:54 PM


Mr. T.! I adore thee!

Ah, yes! Life is a mighty complex thing!

"I am a victim near insane
That resonates a magic soul"

I do so know what you mean!

There is more magic in your soul than David Copperfield has in his prestigious prestidigitator's bag of tricks!

I miss you! I hope you are healing and getting your strength back!


EA  

Magnus
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9 posted 2007-10-14 05:09 PM


Sir Sy,  RPs are okay too,  you are in our
thoughts and we wish you well....Take care
of yourself.

Marchmadness
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10 posted 2007-10-14 07:30 PM


Nice write, Seymour.
             Ida

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2007-10-14 07:30 PM


Yes indeed

nice poem

ARCTIC WIND

XOx Uriah xOX
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12 posted 2007-11-23 01:13 PM


(((complexity)))     (((simplicity)))

(((chicken)))     (((egg)))

(((Sir Sy)))     (((Uriah)))

::smiles::    Fun thoughts

(((Fun Thoughts)))

aziza
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13 posted 2007-12-01 12:13 PM


I always read your poems; I enjoyed this one so much.  I miss seeing your words, thoughts, and reading your wonderful replies to others.  

A

dgvarner
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14 posted 2007-12-01 12:23 PM


very nice seymour poet   repeat, or not!

g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

iliana
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15 posted 2007-12-02 02:44 AM


Come on back from that sea, Sy.....we miss you.   .....jo
JamesMichael
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16 posted 2007-12-02 05:42 AM


Nice writing...James
Margherita
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Eternity
17 posted 2007-12-02 06:10 AM


((((((((Seymour)))))) magical soul, we miss you!!
May you be fine and come back soon!
Sending much love and healing energy your way.
Margherita

suthern
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18 posted 2007-12-04 01:25 PM


There's an awful lot of us beckoning you back to shore, my friend... and hoping your sail is smooth as possible until you can come back to us again.

Beautiful work!!

Sunshine
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19 posted 2007-12-04 01:25 PM


Sending warm hugs, Sy.








TinaTrivett
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20 posted 2007-12-04 01:33 PM


Wishing you the best Sy....missing your words.
luminosity
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21 posted 2007-12-04 02:33 PM


oh I love this....I have a ship of my own *waves*
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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22 posted 2007-12-08 03:55 PM


This is very, very good.  I haven't been here for so very long, but I certainly remember you, and your writing!  I can relate to this so well.


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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23 posted 2007-12-09 06:01 AM


Hello my dear sweet Sir Sy! I have missed your words... I hope you are well ... love RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
24 posted 2007-12-10 08:57 PM


As a "Universalist" ('Complexity' Scientist),
I am especially fond of:

"There’s no subject matter I know
With a beginning or end
There’s no matter that’s just so
It is all subject to a bend(!)"

Applause!!

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