Open Poetry #41 |
From where I come |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Morning comes, then greets the night No wars to fight or mind of hurry Air that’s clean and choice abundant Relaxed the way and not a worry A healthy life with all I need A friend or two with which to share Contented in my habit space But chance to travel anywhere My parents both of Dutch decent Now happy they in Aussie land Six children all in close surround And happy each to give a hand I come from love and taught respect I come from poor but never knew I come from land that holds me warm I come from where regrets are few From place that’s warm and very free Where equal chance is given all I come from where you’d love to be And celebrate my life’s recall |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You're a lucky man, Rick and intelligent enough to know it. Well done. Ida |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed this, Rick. Very refresing piece....sounds like a wonderful place from which to come! *smiles*.....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Rick, it's so good to read you again...I have missed your work since I've been gone. It's wonderful to be back among great poets such as you! hugs, Dixie |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
From place that’s warm and very free Where equal chance is given all I come from where you’d love to be And celebrate my life’s recall wonderful Rick just wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hello Ida, I am indeed in the lucky country and very happy to be here, lovely to see you here again my friend, thank you so much for the visit and comment. Hi Jo, it is a great place to be, free in my own piece heaven, I don't hardly travel or go far, but am happy that way and where I am, thank you for making the effort to reply, appreciated. Dear Dixie, I miss you as well when you not about, having friends to share with must be one of the biggest gifts that life can give us, I so appreciate you my friend and every visit you make, I will keep the kettle hot and the conversation ready ok. Roniece my friend, great to see you today, lovely to have you visit, you know what a great land we live in and I know what a great friend I have in you, thank you for being there. To you all my friend, again thank you for the visit and comments, giving me smiles to take with me during the day and each one I will share. Have a wonderful day and take care. Rick |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Where equal chance is given all I enjoyed your poem greatly and I can feel your gratitude for the place you live in and from where you come from. The quoted sentence is so important, not many countries can say the same! Thank you Rick. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very much Enjoyed Rick! ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like you were blessed with a loving family...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I come from love and taught respect I come from poor but never knew I come from land that holds me warm I come from where regrets are few ~*~ We have a lot in common... were that to be so for more of us... Well done, Poet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rick, I do believe that you came from heaven! Love to you, Dear Poet/Man! Linda |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Margherita, thank you for your company here today, it is indeed a lucky country from where I come and one that I do so love; there is so much misery in this world today and sure there are the good days and the bad, but looking at the future and the past, life shows promise and many good memories. Where equal chance is given all, I believe that to be the truth and strength of this country of mine. Great to have a chat, thank you so much for your reply. Artic Wind, thank you very much my friend for taking the time to read and reply to my poem. Hello James, I do indeed have a loving family and so very lucky to have one, thank you for your reply, much appreciated. My dear Sunshine, beam of inspiration, great to have you reply here today my friend, all these things in common, isn't that just great, glad you are happy with your place in life and where you come from, me too. Take care and be well. Dear Linda, if I come from heaven my friend, all I can say is; it's is a great place to be and a place that everyone can visit, thank you for your reply my friend, very much appreciated and heart felt. To you all my frineds, again thank you so very much, all your words were read and appreicated. Rick Van Weenen |
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