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at the park and in the dark
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at the park and in the dark |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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he arrived right on time two minutes too late woke up with his wifes mother and did nothing at all because his were tied and now things are seen just a little clearer and who said she would be any fairer.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Just another Pete Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74Scotland |
"he arrived right on time two minutes too late" Nice tone setting opening lines - this is a real puzzle with alot behind it. Can I ask who the speaker is and what relationship she/he has to the husband & the mother in the poem? |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I never have seen your work before,! I really enjoyed  ARCTIC WIND |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
well there once was a man.....no just kidding....it's just some insight into life, and the ability to see, no matter how tinted the rosse is on the lens....by the way I don't think he ever did....percieve her any fairer that is...  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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