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BrOKEn PoETrY
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
First thing i have written that is all over the place with no rhyme, let me know how you like it BrOKEn PoETrY With one touch my mentality jumps atmospheres My stomach dives to the bottom of the ocean That emotionless, mysterious, profound look Caresses my mind... Opens my mentality's passages to fresh air The way your love collocates my soul Further liberates the trammel of imagination My serenity and winter blizzard, At the end of the day realization occurs Our love finds no safe nest amongst a labyrinth society To overcome delusion I lay all out and wait... Sorting chromatographically At the bottom lies my love for you So I clip this beautiful pure element and run Use it as my compass Therefore I know disorientation no more Absolute love should not be neglected Rather, treasured and uplifted It’s the miracle in a plane crash The words that have no language No need for explanation It's simply just Love Paul |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sorting chromatographically At the bottom lies my love for you So I clip this beautiful pure element and run Use it as my compass Therefore I know disorientation no more Absolute love should not be neglected Rather, treasured and uplifted I like it very much! Sometimes rhyme does not allow a pure flow of thought, what counts really for me is musicality/tune and this can be obtained also without forced rhyme. Love, Margherita |
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