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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
be for you read this it s not about evry lady in this wourld allot of the are good and upstanding but this is for those that are like in the poem Ladies of today The nature of being sexist now here’s a word of many You can not point out a view not one not any I do not mean the right to vote I do not mean there pay Its the way they spend there time now days is it sexist to be a lady Maybe it was long ago when men were the brutish ones Know day’s women are more prone to fight than in 1961 It might be drugs or the drink but sometimes not at all And every time you come out a pub it’s the women that do brawl Some times it not just women they decide to challenge The silly things what do they think will happen You must never hit a girl no this is wrong Oh wait hold on a minute there acting big and strong But then a again I hold this to you What would you say if this next bit happened to you? If you come out of the pub and you suddenly get hit And you got k.o.ed by a girl they would not care a bit If you got knocked out and had fallen to the ground You never go out again without being laughed out of town But say you got up and hit here back even if it was just a slap Then you are now a women beater and you know what comes with that When that kind of thing starts to travel round They do not get the whole story so you end up underground Because none cares if she hits you first because she’s is a girl She is not a lady any more she’s a goldilocks with curls You know the story of goldilocks and what she did in there She broke an entering on the house stole and broke baby bears chair To me that criminal damage she really was a brute Gold weren’t hard done by she got away with it cos she cute So when you are drinking watch you selves out there You might just get your head kicked in by a bloke with nails and hair May be I am simply blind and see it the wrong way The ladies back in 61 are nothing like to day I know that you are not to stay home and cook all the meals But at least up hold you own creation you own dam ideals Like women should not be hit by men so don’t hit us first Its different if you get a nitwit who tries to nick your purse Because women all ways say that were Neanderthals Yet they’re out there screaming and hitting each other with polls It really doesn’t make since on how it came to be Were women started fighting and hitting you and me? So get rid of this sexist lark it doesn’t make any sense How you can support such a one-way fence Three times they have to hit be for you can report A lucky or bad shot to the head will cut your life quite short This sexist law works only one way round If you say some thing wrong they'll fight you to the ground And this is a problem were not saying that you weak Were all so not saying you have no right to speak? But at least stop the dame fighting and bring back you own rules But make them work both ways not just to support your cause Because I would call it sexist if we call you weak But if you hit like a bloke you should be jailed for a week So yes I know that for this I am wrong and some will disagree But if you look around your self girls then im sure you’ll see But don’t take this wrongly because im a man Take it from some real lady try you mum or gran For there are not many left and few are in the making But if they hold it back there are some of them there hiding There is something that most men and im sure they would agree Instead of dating another bloke they’d rather a lady any one affended by this (there might be some) i am sorry and if you request i will remove this poem.  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Proof reading, correct spelling and punctuation would help. |
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poetninoit Junior Member
since 2007-06-10
Posts 20 |
I totally understand what you are saying. I got punched in the face by one of these ladies last weekend. It's frustrating because you know they know you won't hit them back. It's a good poem with a fresh, original topic that I can definately relate to. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is too complex a theme, to say you are right or you are wrong. There are still many women who are abused by men and in former generations wives never complained, now they can't bear it no more and the reaction to what has been endured, sometimes may frighten the men of today. If we learned to respect each other!! You put a lot of reasoning into this one no doubt. Love, Margherita |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
hi i think that i migh have hit a nerve of a very sensitive i do not want to upset people all so this was aimed at allot of the girls in peterborough uk because they go out and randomly start on blokes in the street now i know some women are still hit by there husbands and they should be shot i do not condone any violence what so ever. it is not ok to hit women but does that mean women should be able to hit thjose with morals and they might come across those who donthave morals and they might get hurt. i am so dearly sorry if you are affended |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Kudanesh, I did not mean to be short with you. I am sorry. I just realized that you are dislexic. My husband was dislexic so I understand the problem. Actually, I agree with your poem to a certain extent. I think that there are women (and men)out there who don't behave very well these days. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am not offended, dear kudanesh, you have touched upon a very serious theme and I understand your point of view. We - women and men - really must move towards harmony and true understanding of each other, to avoid such awful behaviour. Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita said it all  and yes, this is a very serious concept ARCTIC WIND |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
ha yea i like how you concluded this. This is true all around woman think they can hit and its ok sometimes just cuz society think its not a problem. Real fresh |
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Lincoln Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 62Earth |
"We - women and men - really must move towards harmony and true understanding of each other, to avoid such awful behaviour." very much agreed you have many spelling errors that need to be fixed, but other than that it was a good poem. |
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