Open Poetry #41 |
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Break the Silence |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas ![]() |
Break the Silence My lover’s gone. The silence of her passing Lives in these rooms. All those years are in the noise resounding from the walls, on the carrier of my heart. Break the silence, Lord, please . . . break the silence of her passing, and let me sleep. ©wesley james beard, jr. december 2007 not about me... [This message has been edited by jwesley (12-07-2007 10:44 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sending you a warmth of hugs.... Lee J. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Beautiful I think there are times most of us have wanted that silence broken. Beautiful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...brings back memories of a time such as this...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful Write ARCTIC WIND |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm happy that this is not about you, but it resonates with truth, so I suspect you do know... a touching write, j. ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Jimmy, my breath caught in my throat when I read this...You touch deep with this my dear friend... ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read ![]() |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderfully expressed.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Just another Pete Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74Scotland |
The person leaves but the love remains along with the memories. Very thoughtful. Pete. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always a beautiful heartspeak from you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Jimmy, this heart-tugging poem may not, thankfully, be about you, but your empathetic words show the depth of your compassionate soul. Love to you ~ as well as to the one who is suffering such a loss. Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Your compassionate heart shows through the tears, Jimmy. *hugs to you*......jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It really does touch the heart! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad it's not about you but how tender this feels to me ![]() |
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