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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-12-07 06:41 AM



I touch your mouth with mine
only minds like ours have lips
and hands that allow things

that we think about from our distances
like the cherokees did
when they walked in those winters

hoping for summers and spirits
that would bring their dreams
in tomorrowing baskets

now my soul carries a stone
lest there is ever a quiet ocean
outside your want to window

and you crave something more disturbing


____________

daark


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-12-07 08:46 AM


teddy bear I tell ya...     Awww D, this is so tenderly beautiful.  You touch, lovely babe.
LeeJ
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2 posted 2007-12-07 08:49 AM


a fine winter design for the lovelorn...and hopeless romantics....

lovely

aziza
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3 posted 2007-12-07 11:51 AM


Your poetry is a feelin' thing.  Eyes feel your thoughts written - and carry the message to the soul.

Your poetry has pushed aside my Wheaties and mutters, "I am 'what's for breakfast' now."

Your poetry married my coffee.

A

Margherita
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4 posted 2007-12-07 12:37 PM


I touch your mouth with mine
only minds like ours have lips
and hands that allow things



You always show the power of your mind
and you stir the reader's mind with equal power.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-12-07 05:04 PM


gs, thanks lady friend

__________

ms leej, thank you gentle friend for your eyes and your warm thoughts

____________

ms az, what?  no oatmeal?  and here I have tattoo'd the quaker oats man on my chest just to impress you..oh darn...thanks babe

________

ms mar, thank you special one for your eyes and feelings on the end of my words

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-12-09 06:06 AM


now my soul carries a stone
lest there is ever a quiet ocean
outside your want to window

and you crave something more disturbing

mmm... I understand these lines Mr Daark very well..  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2007-12-09 07:17 AM


ms R & B..thank you for looking out your window
and wishing for a stone

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2007-12-09 07:25 AM


I touch your mouth with mine
only minds like ours have lips
and hands that allow things

that we think about from our distances


sometimes~~ you bring tears to my eyes

MM

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
9 posted 2007-12-09 07:53 AM


ms MMs thanks for the smile sided tears babe
Angel4aKing
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10 posted 2007-12-11 12:18 PM


Is my soul that transparent that you can read it so clear from miles away???? Or is my soul just one of a multitude, standing alone no secrets left to share....except the ones that they so easily bare.....????

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2007-12-11 06:18 AM


ms angel..is there not only one soul
shared by many
thanks babe

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