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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
He hung out the yellow lantern She lit up a gas light Who turned you on tonight? So round and bright like a shinning eye as to witness that the mermaid on the rock was wishing for a broken journey |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 Tom, as a Pisces little mermaid, I thank you for your poem! The Lady In The Water |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a delightful glimpse into your "Seaside Camping" experience!  Mine was with a merman! lol Hugs to you! EA  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very effectful scenery! Love, Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The moon highlights all mysterious things, especially love by the seaside. Wonderful dreamscape. TD |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So lovely, Tom. A |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most pleasant and interesting 'write'! Applause! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nicely penned. Enjoyed. JL Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
After reading your lovely verse it makes me wish I was a merman. well done Tom. LindsayP |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
short and peaceful very nice I am the little cracked mirror |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I thoroughly enjoyed this.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
perfectly perfect Tomtoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Bravo! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Romantically charged -- very cool poem! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
to know a mermaids wish is to see her hands shake out of water, and know that her only wish then is the wish undone...beautiful poem....bye 4 now, JAC ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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