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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I was always better as a clown than I was with cards easier to play one than to win with them something about expressions and how they change on skin but never on paper unless you fold it in two and then open it again but then the damage shows too and makeup don't work on paper they say when clowns make up you can tell who they were with by the shared paint and crossed over expressions transfers are like a kiss that leaves residue in two places something on the skin and something more deeper under in that can't touch this room with hearts and other clutter and makeup don't work, on paper ____________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Awesome, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I just woke up to let the dogs out and forgot to turn this damn thing off - so I came to do that and got caught by you and Margherita's poetry. Now I am stumbling back to bed to dream of makeup on paper and gamblers (or something like that). Intriguing, D. A |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A different deliciously delightful side of Dark Stranger definitely delivering enjoyment of the diversity of your decadently delectable writing capabilities dear D.  I so enjoy reading you.... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I've reread and reread this one. It's something I would never have thought of, totally alien to my way of thinking, but it resonates strongly with me. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you are amazing Mr Daark...  RDB xBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
i agree with the reread, very deep in your style , and makes one think in different ways that we are accustomed too. THANKS |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks pipgang...it woke me up too, the concept..had to let it out thank you for looking in this one |
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