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'Universal' Poetry
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'Universal' Poetry |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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‘Universal’ Poetry On this night… of deepest serenity, as wispy sky-flower clouds shadow dance with moonbeams over these frosted lands and empty Winter mountains, the first moonlight flows across a bare wooden floor in this lonely room… that time forgot , revealing the sparkling poet-dreams being spun and woven into ‘Deep-Time’ tapestries, to laud the endless wonder of Nature’s ‘voice’ and things forever changing, in a cosmos of infinite beauty beyond all human reason, imagination, and intent! Bruce E. Adams Jr. (12/05/07) |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Bruce, This is beautiful and these lines are haunting the first moonlight flows across a bare wooden floor in this lonely room… I really like this poem and tucked it safely in my library. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
to laud the endless wonder of Nature’s ‘voice’ and things forever changing, in a cosmos of infinite beauty beyond all human reason, imagination, and intent! totally after my heart as many of your exceptional offerings, dear Bruce! Love, Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh I like the way you spin me around the moonlight. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Truly enjoyed this my friend...love reading you... jwesley |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"On this night… of deepest serenity, as wispy sky-flower clouds shadow dance with moonbeams.." You moved with me, slow dance, with your words. Thank you for taking the lead. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful and beautiful as always. Today I was driving toward mountain in dawn I watched the rising sun painting it with colors of no name, in patience. stroke by stroke I wanted to write a poem but I gave up on thinking of yours I better keep those images as memory my words, they are just not enough. Tomtoo  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ah...Bruce, you do have a way with serenity!  Seriously though, you see creation before it happens! A mesmerizing glimpse that you write too, m'friend. Loved this. |
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