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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Horizons Memory serves itself dessert Lingering temptations skirt Folding fantasy sweet as cream Necessities still hungry dream Careen, we always toward the west In salvage sunset from its rest Fearful darkness might lead dawn Memory serves well itself to feed upon Passed by the days in gentle deeds Hoping blossoms from the seeds Glazed advance, compared to then Softly come, remember when Copyright Kkh 12/3/07 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I remember you're good  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Passed by the days in gentle deeds Hoping blossoms from the seeds Glazed advance, compared to then Softly come, remember when more than good, you are excellent, I would say! Love, Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'Memory serves itself dessert'---Oh I can't tell you how much I like that line! There's a light touch to this whole poem that I truly appreciate. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Interesting ‘write’! The beginning and ending lines (and images) are particularly fine!: “Memory serves itself dessert”; “Passed by the days in gentle deeds Hoping blossoms from the seeds… Softly come, remember when” Applause! [I, for one, could use some new 'horizons!'] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
'softly come, remember when' ... what an ending....wonderful write. j. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful writing. |
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