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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-07-26 06:35 PM

   ‘Multiversal’ Love?!

In this ever-lonely world,
where only relentless change
  is ‘for certain’…
when the finger-tip mist
  and smoldering dusk
curl ‘round the evening’s
   hushed ‘uncertainties’,
perhaps light and time
transform all that they touch
into multifarious silhouettes,
echoing forever…
just beyond our grasp;
and, we ‘awake’ for just
  one fine moment
from the mystic trance of ‘life’,
(with lucid ‘vision’ in the dark)
to wonder…
if eternal ‘love and peace’
   really might exist…
but only in some other
  'universe',
(always unknown and
  unknowable)
spinning away…in infinite
  ‘cosmic-arabesque’,
beyond the speed of light
where even ‘time’ has
  no meaning!

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

1 posted 2007-07-26 08:03 PM

This write is too fine, Poet! It takes my breath away...

Berenice
Junior Member

since 2007-07-18

Posts 18

2 posted 2007-07-26 08:59 PM

This is a very beautiful poem and I love every word of it. well penned.

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2007-07-27 01:25 AM

Yes, this really takes my breath away; WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2007-07-27 06:25 AM

"to wonder…
if eternal ‘love and peace’
really might exist…"

We have to believe it does just to get through life! Great write, as usual - thank you!

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2007-07-27 08:08 AM

This is truly a great write.  I am thinking now of universe...is it not one song?  And should we (all of us) sing over and over the chorus of peace and love, would this not be the dominant in our world?

Yes, I think you words may change my thinking for this day.  A much needed change and a fresh breath this morning.

Thanks
Patricia

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2007-07-27 09:57 AM

When all that walk the earth are dust,
may your words float forever,
in the grandest swirl
of romantic poetry,
honoring eternal love!

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

7 posted 2007-07-28 11:39 AM

Just re-reading this and enjoying it all over again. Midnitesun gives us a great commentary on this writing in her post, above.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2007-07-28 12:07 PM

Mystical quality to this Bruce.
..."spinning away…in infinite
‘cosmic-arabesque’"...
Loved this.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2007-10-13 09:34 PM

There's that mystical quality again that makes all of you poems so beautiful and enjoyable.
Ida

Words have a longer life than deeds.

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