Open Poetry #41 |
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all night long... (a take off on an mystery post) |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho ![]() |
all night long... the officer said yeah that's right that woman is running an insane asylum kid's carrying on all night long ya know I'm afraid to leave my home they gawk at me with strange awkward stares while echoes of pink floyd and the sultans of dire straits are deafening my ears to the south she points with her hand a backyard neighbor is rocking to a garage band I screamed at them but they just don't understand turn it d o w n heavy bass rap is shaking my windows with the driving sounds kids riding by want to know if I get high they walk towards me say they got what I need another officer notices the hum & ghostly sirens of the city has somewhat of a profuse squall in comparison to the drown of the music people who are flailing a cry of torture in rhythm with the t h r a s h but officer these folks are grouping on the corners up and down the street their loud voices can be heard for a distance do they need to tell the world their business they laugh and carry on either ignorant or uncaring of all the hearing there's a party going on in my front yard and they're sitting on my car no doubt brought on by some alkaloid cocaine adrenaline induced d r e a m not to mention all the heart rending screams tire screeches and giggles from female creatures a party yes officer a party I could tell you a thing or two about what I been hearin' and I can tell you it's not looking so petty just the facts Miss of course sir I was just gonna to tell you my eyes have been noticin' an awful lot of chaos beneath the label of desperate interaction up late & I watch CSI you know & I know somebody was beat up and robbed just the other day and another neighbor just couldn't take it any longer and committed suicide and those guys aren't even from this side of town and you know I been hearin' you guys are cracking d o w n so... why don't cha just tell 'em they'll have to get along or you'll take 'em down town where they can carry on all n i g h t long Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~ [This message has been edited by lucky (12-07-2007 02:08 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... it does get old. But I put the gun away. ![]() This sounds like what I came home to...quiet now though. You write the madness very well. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and the beat goes on... literally figuratively well done, Lucky. It's been a long while, and we've missed you! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Thank a you, Karen I'd been meaning to ask you 'bout your neck of the woods. Actually we were the one's running the insane asylum and she our next door neighbor. Most the time the police wouldn't even come out if we called. Finally a friend told me to tell the cops that they had guns. You know what... it worked... They were there in a flash and when everybody disappeared we set out on our way. And Sunshine, not a long time... a little time... nice to see you. Sending best and holiday prayer. It's a bad time of year for a lot of people. best friends best finds sisters mine dale . |
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