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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-12-04 06:34 AM


I had good byes all printed on signs
to place along your highway smile
and wore my favorite turn my back shirt too

so you could see it easy tomorrow
when I put my own reigns back on
and spurred a gallop of opposition

somewhere down the road from old mosey
where it was safe to pout again
and play in the lonely man puddles

with my best boots on some give-a-sheets
carefully folded under linen newspapers
but you said hi and sounded fragile

so I used those signs to patch your halo
__________

daark



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-12-04 07:25 AM


I've no words...
but hugs, I have plenty of....  


Touching deep this morning, you are D..
*kotc*

"In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things."
-Barbara Ann Kipfer

Kahlil
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2 posted 2007-12-04 09:23 AM


You are such a delight to read, Mr. Softy.
Margherita
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3 posted 2007-12-04 12:33 PM


Such incredible eloquence, dear D.!

Postpone the good-byes to tomorrow ... when you can be the gift of today. And this inspiration is already a significative reward, don't you think?

Love,
Margherita


aziza
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4 posted 2007-12-04 01:55 PM


You are such a knight in dark shining armour!

I loved this.  
I think your poetry is so much you,
unique - and some wonderful tossed in too.

That's what I think anyway.

A

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2007-12-04 02:04 PM


Burma Shave...

I'm probably the only one here
that knows this...


Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2007-12-04 04:31 PM


How odd that one look can change resolution.  I love this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-12-04 11:15 PM


delightful Mr Daark... I always look forward to reading you during my day .. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-12-05 06:22 AM


ms gs, thank you donna for your touch

___________

ms kahlil, thanks babe for the read and reply

_____________


ms mar, thanks to you for touching here


___________

ms az, you bless me little one, thank you for being you

____________

ms sun, you always warm me, thank you babe


____________

ms nan, thank you for letting me take some some of your time here


____________

ms R & B, thank you for being here in your mornings

SEA
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9 posted 2007-12-05 09:35 AM


awww...look how sweet you are
the ending of this is so tender...

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2007-12-05 04:37 PM


ms suesea..I am soft and tender...for short periods of time..on occasion..kinda...thanks babe
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