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. . . Who or what am I (responding poorly to Patricia's challenge)
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. . . Who or what am I (responding poorly to Patricia's challenge) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
aspiring poet poor writer of senryus tankas and haikus add occasional free verse, toss in a sonnet overlook errors you will see a speck of me but nothing of who I am you see, I don’t share with just anyone, you see, who the real me is oh, sure, God knows me after all is said and done He’s the real I am Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Excellent! Home is not where you live, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Coy to the end... Well done, Sir. But I would have to disagree with one little statement within your verse. And you know which one!  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Interloper......I agree with my sister, Sunshine.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"aspiring poet" ~ I think you are well past the "aspiring" part!  ~ and you are a Doctor of Love! ~ and Love makes the world go 'round and that puts a Big Smiley Face on the 'I Am'! EA |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Well done, Interloper. Ida |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
And I am --- always greatful that I get to read your poetry. Alison |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I love this piece of perfection! Thanks so much for sharing. Patricia |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Ah yes... ....and they shall say unto me, what is his name? what shall I say unto them? And God said unto Moses, I AM THAT I AM... The immensity of "I AM" knows no boundary. To say "i am" has little meaning. lucky dale . |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Sorry...'bout that..! Bump... dale [This message has been edited by lucky (12-05-2007 09:36 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
oh, sure, God knows me after all is said and done He’s the real I am and you are part of Him! Wow, our concluding lines convey the same truth, I see. Enjoyed your poem, but I disagree too like our friends above when you say you are an "aspiring" poet ... you ARE a poet and that's it. Love, Margherita  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh but you show yourself in poetry much more fully than you realize. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you see, I don’t share with just anyone, you see, who the real me is You ARE ya know???  M |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and incredible response, enjoyed and thank you |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
"He's the real I am" - that's for sure! I've been gone so long, I don't know your work. However, I have a hunch you are being too modest. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love to write haiku's, they are very fun, and to talk about nature, I love it! Nicely put  ARCTIC WIND |
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