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connecting the dots
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connecting the dots |
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CudMonk Junior Member
since 2007-11-28
Posts 21 |
"connecting the dots" I keep a paper star folded in my wallet. The creases as are deep as outer space and and the fibers are disintegrating. Yet, when it is dark, too dark to see, I pull the star out and I tape it to my ceiling basking in the light of symbolism, pointing to a universe of possibilities. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
The possibilites are endless. I love the outer space metaphor, and how your words inspire hope and anticipation. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sorry I missed this one. You captured the mood and the moment in a wonderful way. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed your post!  ARCTIC WIND |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
How could I not check out a poem written by someone with a pen name of cudmonk?! I'm glad I did because I found a little treasure here. Think I'm going to try that star trick! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
a star to paint to your perefction then ask out for a first date is the best kind of star, maybe she'll even be up for taping your ceiling...  lol I like this alot really cool....take care, kingsangel BTW welcome to pip, the girl you can talk to and know she'll keep it all to herself....LOL ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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