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Cold And Lonely |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Life can be one as a broken heart, Life is beautiful, They say, But noone can understand, One can be cold and lonely, In this cold and dark place, Everyone needs time and space, Sometimes, Life is hard To know why? When the world turns upside down, Looking at the ground, Finding love we can, Love is only we need right now, Life is sweet, Life is hard and that all I know, But at times goes and comes In life, Feeling cold and lonely, I guess, They say, You're lucky to be alive, Cold and lonely...... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
(((((vandana)))) There are those moments when we feel cold and lonely and you describe this solitude very efficiently. It is true though that we should be grateful for this life, I look at it as a divine gift. When we become aware of the fact that we are one with the Creator and with creation, we can't really feel lonely. But there are these moments when we are far from realizing this and just feel cold. That's why I understand your sadness and reach out to hug you, to give you the warmth of friendship across the world. Love and hugs, dear vandana. Margherita  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that's what they say... When the world turns upside down~~ "You're lucky to be alive" ~sighing~ and understanding  M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I feel your heart, vandana. Thank you for allowing me to peek in at it. A |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
You wrote beautiful emotional and love poems. I like this too. Tomtoo |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I know how you feel, I can be in a room full of people, and still feel alone, even with family soemtimes.. Hugs to you~ARh |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms vandana...lonely is a blessing most of the time...it lets you feel that side of love...just before the other side becomes the dawn..enjoyed you here |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
"But noone can understand, One can be cold and lonely, In this cold and dark place, Everyone needs time and space" I really enjoyed reading this poem. You speak your feelings with beautifully sad lyric. Nice write. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hugs...hope your loneliness is short lived and new days and possibilities will bring a smile to your face and the joy of living to your heart...this poem reminds me of an Alan Jackson song..."In the real world, the guy doesn't always get the girl."...James |
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