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Open Poetry #41

Weeping garden

diab soule
New Member

since 2007-12-01

Posts 6
ohio

0 posted 2007-12-02 02:37 PM

-Weeping garden-

Entering the pale garden,
thistles strive for excellence;
fathoming in wicked schemes,
bored to fated negligence--

Forbidden fruit pouring pity,
for it is mute, non existent;
a weeping tear liquids the sky,
though emotionally distant--

------Laying beneath the rain,
where gentle wind once blew;
lied there, the frown of thorns,
---------A secret rendezvous.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2007-12-02 02:47 PM

Oh this is very cool!

enjoyed...
g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-12-02 02:57 PM

Welcome!!!!!

This is a lovely poem

ARCTIC WIND

diab soule
New Member

since 2007-12-01

Posts 6
ohio

3 posted 2007-12-02 04:35 PM

Thanks for the Welcome

Gumpy
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 143
Canada

4 posted 2007-12-03 11:55 AM

Nice read. Enjoyed it.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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