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How It Grows |
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smellmyfinger Junior Member
since 2007-12-02
Posts 21Wyoming,Natrona |
Take these weights Off my eyes Lift the promise From my lies Rid the darkness From the light Oh, how you remind me Of the angel I need Why can’t you comfort Me when I bleed As I remain inert How we recede So many times I cried How many nights Must I lie and wait Reach your heights Till the shadows waste Your lovely ways PLEASE COMFORT ME Fear slowly grows Beneath my toes No place to run away PLEASE COMFORT ME My need exceeds my want Grip your hand and smile I have not lost my mind If you hold me awhile Remember these hard times I’ll be versatile Oh, angel why can’t you see How my life will cease I can’t take this anymore Of riding the breeze Why do you ignore My freaking pleas PLEASE COMFORT ME The hole only grows Beneath my toes No reason to love anyway |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
again i like your wording and the way its consructed the meening in what u right i great ps: sorry about spelling |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very emotional write. The yearning is deeply felt. Don't let that hole grow, hug yourself and breathe in divine love ... Love, Margherita |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very deep...I like the way you pen! g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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