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Beneath The Sea
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Beneath The Sea |
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smellmyfinger Junior Member
since 2007-12-02
Posts 21Wyoming,Natrona |
The fog keeps rolling on Suffocating until we’re gone Watch your sons and daughters In the harshest of waters Drown beneath the sea The coastline washed away Storms rushed in disarray The aqua was overcoming Lights barely humming Gently beneath the sea Metal eroded from the pressure An absence would never deter An old sailor sank crying Afraid of never dying Crushed beneath the sea There’s no more beauty in this It has all sunk into the abyss In the saltiest of waters This species has faltered Trampled beneath the sea Tears expanded the world As waves swiftly twirled Hope plunged far below It was lost long ago Thrust beneath the sea Eyes soon began to close Seeing the ancients ghosts They were grimly seeing The end of a human being Dying beneath the sea Gaze into the future Eye what we will endure The end beneath the sea |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very powerful First post you got there! Welcome To pip! You will love it here, you will have so many friends, and all of us get along together very well!  Great and powerful first post ARCTIC WIND |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Welcome to PiP. I really like this poem (and I have to admit, I am still laughing over your name) Again, welcome. A |
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smellmyfinger Junior Member
since 2007-12-02
Posts 21Wyoming,Natrona |
thanks =) I have been writing for 2 years and love it. I can't wait to get to know you guys better |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful poem. love the read. welcome to PIPtalk the wonderful place. Tom |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
yes i love the way it goes to gether powerful thats the way it should be good job ps:sorry bout my spelling |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello! I hope that you will enjoy sailing pip's blue seas!  ~ Some say that mankind originally emerged from the sea! ~ and I suppose it only makes sense that we will return to the sea! lol Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hi. I enjoyed your first post. I hope that you will enjoy your time among us and I am looking forward to reading more from your pen. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
great writing...enjoyed! Welcome to the blue pages  g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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