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Open Poetry #41

A Quiet Moment

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2007-11-29 04:19 PM

Blackbirds fly
into a patch of blue sky
framed by the purple lace
of the jacaranda trees.
I watch the feathery,
green branches
release their blossoms
in the gentle breeze.
I am sitting on my back porch
observing the forever sky,
dreaming a poet's dreams.
Just my cat and I.

Ida Werrett

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-11-29 06:15 PM

Thank you dear Ida for letting me be there together with you, your cat and the blackbirds ... dreaming.

Loved this much, its after my own heart.

(I use to have morning conversations with blackbirds and of course with my cat too ...

)

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-11-29 07:06 PM

grand-fine imagery!...a most pleasant 'write!'

I greatly enjoyed reading it!

Applause!!

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2007-11-29 07:13 PM

Ida your back porch sounds like a place of

real bliss and I'll bet your cat thinks so too. much enjoyed.

Lindsay.

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