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Open Poetry #41

The Moon Giant.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2007-11-29 03:56 PM

Tides swell to
your hands sweep.
Stoop unto the
shores of the
world. Pour clensing
waters to wash
upon the lands.
Bring silvering high
waves strewing upon
the salt sea
strands, entwining winds,
clouds, stars and
lonely planets blue.
Then take rest,
so your streamed
purity may ebb
back out, to
bring new baptisms
across the globe.

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-11-29 06:11 PM

quote:
Then take rest,
so your streamed
purity may ebb
back out, to
bring new baptisms
across the globe.

Wonderful imagery, dear Phil.
A true gem.

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-11-29 06:19 PM

fine imagery!...

I am particularly fond of:

"Tides swell to
your hands sweep.
Stoop unto the
shores of the
world. Pour cleansing
waters to wash
upon the lands.
Bring silvering high
waves..."

and:

"...strands, entwining winds,
clouds, stars..."

Applause!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-12-02 12:49 PM

Hi, Phil! I appreciate how you creatively spun lunar magic into this fine piece of poetic tapestry.

A pleasure to read ~ and to visualize.

Love & Lunar Magic,

Linda

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2007-12-03 01:48 AM

What a cleansing piece this is! I can heart the rhythm of the tides and the piece leaves me totally refreshed in thought, Phil! That's magic! *hugs*....jo

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2007-12-03 01:51 AM

clouds, stars and
lonely planets blue.

so true....

~ARH

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2007-12-03 06:39 PM

Thank you,Phil, for these beautiful words:
"Then take rest,
so your streamed
purity may ebb
back out, to
bring new baptisms
across the globe."

M

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