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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Again You approach me with a youthfulness that has been diminished in the seasoning of my own life. "Little girl dreams" lost~~ never feeling good enough to surplant the past, with the light of tomorrow. Warmth has returned with my regrets, as I stalk my nights with thoughts to heal the legends of yesterday, whispering only to oneself those feelings held close to my heart in fear... that they shall never be returned, again. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Nothing compares to a good “stalking” (just hope there aren’t too many “Brits” reading this. Now I would say “What comes round goes round” I like the bit “You approach me with a youthfulness” You know it’s only when you get older and decide enough is enough that you have license to become youthful again…. No-one can laugh at you to any effect, you have no boss and no cares, besides you have done over and over what these young whippersnappers think is something new. You can dress more classic and be perfectly acceptable…forget about the ideal shape…be yourself..No speed records to break…. No teen years to worry about spots, couple of years here or there doesn’t really matter that much anymore… Been there done that, it’s in the bag….. now I am quite happy to watch the youngsters strutting their stuff and I don’t have to compete… Isn’t it nice being older and wiser… Eric |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
powerfully emotive 'write!' I am particularly fond of the ending: "whispering only to oneself those feelings held close to my heart in fear... that they shall never be returned, again(!)" applause! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Eric and Bruce...just feeling my age lately  M |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is a fabulous write  |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Like the perspective lucky dale |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
nakdthoughts, With so few words, you so eloquently share the feelings people have forever felt. Powerful and excellent writing! miscellanea |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Back to the top Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you again..and "I"...you are a sweetheart M |
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