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ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
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0 posted 2007-11-29 07:10 AM


My eyes slowly close to a world of unconcious,
and all the days thoughts begin to unfold.

Love, Hate, Joy, Anxiety and so much more,
twist into a technicolor movie.

The direction is unknown and the film is flowing,
only to disect it at dawns light.

Influences from the present, past and future,
mold into one long stream.

Some waters are calm and serene,
and some waters are like tidal waves, crashing with an unforgiving force.

Ever concious of my surroundings and the movie,
I allow it to continue.

Until I find the movie needs to end,
and my reality needs to return at dawns light.

© Copyright 2007 Lisa A Joost - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2007-11-29 06:09 PM


quote:
Ever concious of my surroundings and the movie,
I allow it to continue.

Until I find the movie needs to end,
and my reality needs to return at dawns light.



Every day has its new beginnings. I love your thoughts, dear Lisa, you expressed them so very beautifully.

Love,
Margherita

Margherita
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Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2007-12-01 06:37 AM


ms lisa..why must it end...why must the dream ever end?  enjoyed you here
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