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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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will it be another velvet morning when my eyes would look underneath horizons for the limbs of lady tree in her leaveless gown while the footprints of your stranger, friday in this desertion of my metropolitan isle baths the wicked end of agony's urges by the handfuls polishing a magic lamp with the salvation of manful dreaming and would we worship our side skin cashmere just for the pleasure of the other's gods and the eyes of another wanting another without the binding leather of love songs or dare I dream we are both oceans ___________ daark |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"or dare I dream we are both oceans" beautiful just beautiful |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling softly here D~ lovely |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Stranger! A poetic treat from: "will it be another velvet morning when my eyes would look underneath horizons for the limbs of lady tree in her leaveless gown" ...all the way down to your intriguing closing lines: "or dare I dream we are both oceans" I say, "dare to dream"!   EA ___________ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Velvet words, D. They drift with the darkness that peers in my windows on this early morning. Lovely way to slowly begin my day. A |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS......I do believe you of all people, would dare to dream. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Dare to dream to the extreme --- This is poetically enchanting Thank you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, just yes  M |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes indeed... I would dare to dream with you Mr Daark!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick, you make me smile beyond my smile sides, thank you _______________ ms GS, thank you donna for your lady ways ________________ ms Ea, you bless me with your touch, thank you ms _________________ ms AZ, you melt the winter with your smile edges, thank you lady friend _________________ ms martie, thank you little neighbor for stepping close here __________________ ms enchant, thank you for the eyes on my humble pen _______________ ms MMs, you smooth me with your sooth song, thank you ms ___________ ms R & B, it would be a pleasure ms, to dance your thoughts often, thank you |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
me likey. i can tell you are quite good. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you friend eagle, I appreciate your reply |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
Hi Dark, Very exquisite indeed and shows me how much work I have to do myself....intreaguing. Illusive x |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
A borrowing from Lee Hazelwood and Nancy Sinatra? "Some velvet morning when I'm straight, I'm gonna open up your gate, " Happens all the time. Best, Jim |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend illusive, thank you for the eyes and the reply. _________ friend oceanvu2..I would think velvet mornings predate them..but Mr Hazelwood did use some remarkable images in his lyrics. Thank you for the read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This one slipped me by and it was well worth the diving! Yes, dare to dream always ... it adds so much charm to our lives. Wonderful! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ms mar for your eyes here |
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