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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Transitions near a forest meadow as night pales into dawn… a wooded thrush sings alone for no one near a forest meadow as twilight deepens into night… a woodland willow weeps alone for all! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I could sit and listen to this thrush song forever, especially: "near a forest meadow as night pales into dawn" |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
What a beautiful poem. beauty flow through the comparison. pale into deepen into night to down twilight to night sing for no one weeps for all what a world! enjoyed a lot tom |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful. Ida |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"...I meant, not even if asked; and I hadn't been." This is a gorgeous little poem, perfectly balanced and poignantly expressed. From now on, I'm going to make sure I read more of you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This is truly a finely crafted, well thought out poem to be read, re-read ... savored. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The beauty of this took my breath away, you listen with your heart no doubt. Love, Margherita |
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