Open Poetry #41 |
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outskirts of mosey town |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
yea though I walk sometimes through your valley lady tree I fear I know of our evil more than you would care to lest you became a willow with the bending of wanting and ambering up of your eyes until there were tears again and you had fragile in your voice that kept you awake some nights waiting for the morning tides to sooth you with another day and the distant sound of my soul pretending to be just a wind wanting your limbs as they dance over a stranger's praying fingers on the hem of mosey town outskirts __________ daark |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
did you write this one in church yesterday? while you observed the one in the next pew... the one with that look in her eyes? "on the hem of mosey town outskirts" I love reading you... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
When the stranger writes love/ly words, it sure is purdy.... ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and ambering up of your eyes until there were tears again and you had fragile in your voice that kept you awake some nights waiting for the morning tides to sooth you with another day and the distant sound of my soul pretending to be just a wind" good grief mister!! this is so sweetly tender...touched ever so softly ![]() |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my Mr Daark... you sure do have a way with words... enjoyed ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kahlil, thanks so much lady friend __________ ms gs, thanks babe for the eyes here ____________ ms suesea, thank you for feeling under the edges of this one babe _____________ ms R & B thanks to you for your eye play here |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: sigh ... and you had fragile in your voice and now the voice is gone ... Take a bow. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you babe |
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