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vandana
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0 posted 2007-11-25 12:54 PM



Iam still there,
Still there for love,
I will here for you,
To hold you tight,
I will be there for you,
Our song is playing for us
In time
My love will be there,
Still there,
Our love will grow,
There will be time for us,
When we realize our love
meant to be,
Still there,
Your memory will be there
in my heart,
Will still there
our love is still there,
Will be still there,
The path of our hearts,
I will still find my love
somewhere
Somehow,
I will see through this road,
Iam still driving
through this misty night,
I will search for love
Love for me,
I wonder,
If our love will still there
still there for me,
still there....


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-11-25 03:04 PM


Hopefully...James
Fairplay
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since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England
2 posted 2007-11-25 06:59 PM


Whoops this verse was "Here There Everywhere"

repetative words ccccconfuse mmmmeeeeeee   I would call this a stutter poem...

I hope my comment brings it some attention so more experianced poets can put either you or me right....

Eric

Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

3 posted 2007-11-25 07:28 PM


I enjoyed your poem. Nicely written.
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
4 posted 2007-11-25 07:45 PM



Never give up hope Vandana

and I certainly wish you luck.

Lindsay

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