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Still There |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Iam still there, Still there for love, I will here for you, To hold you tight, I will be there for you, Our song is playing for us In time My love will be there, Still there, Our love will grow, There will be time for us, When we realize our love meant to be, Still there, Your memory will be there in my heart, Will still there our love is still there, Will be still there, The path of our hearts, I will still find my love somewhere Somehow, I will see through this road, Iam still driving through this misty night, I will search for love Love for me, I wonder, If our love will still there still there for me, still there.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hopefully...James |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Whoops this verse was "Here There Everywhere" repetative words ccccconfuse mmmmeeeeeee I would call this a stutter poem... I hope my comment brings it some attention so more experianced poets can put either you or me right.... Eric |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I enjoyed your poem. Nicely written. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Never give up hope Vandana and I certainly wish you luck. Lindsay |
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