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A Deeper Orchestration
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A Deeper Orchestration |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A Deeper Orchestration Aspen hold their leaves, steadfast like castanets against the breeze Returning the glimmer of God’s smile, in shivers all the while Quaking, though not cold Dressed translucently in gold Dancing in November song, fine instruments awhile belong To the seasonal vibration of a deeper orchestration Aspen hold their leaves Copyright Kkh 11/24/07 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (11-25-2007 07:33 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I heard those 'castanet' aspens. Nicely orchestrated, TD. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful Diamond! you truly Sparkle ARCTIC WIND |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen, despite the shortage of rain this year in the midatlantic, the ride through the country to work everyday has the most beautiful golden to red colors of fall lining the roads. The prettiest I have seen in years. M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Do they, as you say ... hold their leaves? are they a tree that does not shet all their leaves? Beautiful descriptive writings, well done. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD "Aspen hold their leaves, steadfast like castanets against the breeze" You hear of the quaking aspen...I wonder why the name?...perhaps it is because they shake and rattle, but don't loose their leaves, I don't know. Enjoyed your poetry as I always do. |
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