Open Poetry #41 |
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What Happened? |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
On his day off, my husband would say, "I think I'll wash and wax the car today." And as he prepared to accomplish this task he had just a few little questions to ask.... Where's the bucket? I need some soap. I can't find the car wax. Bring me one of those small trash bags. Where's that long-handled brush? Got any old rags? Now, let me see, What happened to that long extension cord? I'm getting thirsty, could you make up some tea? And plug in the vacuum cleaner, please. Could you bring me the windex and some more of that tea? That was hard work, I'm totally beat Well, I sure worked up an appetite, anything to eat? When he'd finally finished he'd give himself a pat on the back and head for the couch for a little nap. While I would take a moment to catch my breath. For he had indeed washed the car and yet, I had a suspicion that I had been duped. Since he'd washed the car how come I was so pooped? Ida Werrett |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my word! That was one amusing read! I found myself noddin' 'n smilin' ~ all the way through! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
He definately knows how to delegate...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
MarchMadness- I enjoy reading your poems ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
It sounds like you are a great backstop Ida a very valuable asset to any man, Keep up the good work. Lindsay |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
A honey-do list! But I think it's spelled G-O F-E-R! Such a cute write, and somehow, very familiar scenario! ![]() |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
WOW... I loved this poem. From a grin to a smile to outright laughter. Thanx. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
This is great...very funny. You know what they say. Behind every great man washing a car, is a great woman with a cup of tea and a bottle of Windex. =) Joe "A witty saying prooves nothing" (Voltare) |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
This is so cute Ida...thanks for the morning grin. ![]() |
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