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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-11-23 02:44 PM


Nothing To Lose

While thinking in our hearts
that feelings and desires
are mutual that are not,
sometimes we convince ourselves
that we are losing everything

while the other...

already knows in their heart
that they are losing nothing.

JamesLee
23November
2007




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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-11-24 09:55 PM


yes... I understand this James... communication is the key!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-11-25 03:58 AM


Yes Roniece...sometimes if we're not careful we can create a wild love story in our hearts while the other has no such intentions or desires...James
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3 posted 2007-11-28 11:37 PM


.....sigh....would that it were not so....but this is oh so very true.

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lucky
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4 posted 2007-12-01 10:57 AM


James - I like this - I agree with Ed but I wanted to see a little more female response on this before I said anything. So it's back to the top with this one James.

lucky dale

[This message has been edited by lucky (12-01-2007 11:49 AM).]

Jenna
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5 posted 2007-12-01 11:45 AM


I can definitely relate to this one right now.Very well put.
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6 posted 2007-12-04 12:39 PM


And when we lose everything and realize they lost nothing... we lose even more... we can't even cherish the memories. *sigh*

Excellent write... all too painfully true!


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-12-05 03:58 AM


Thank you Ratleader, lucky, Jenna and suthern for the nice responses...James
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