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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197
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We have to not talk. There is something I have to not say. What does it matter what it cost me to give you up. When the choice is all or nothing and all is not mine to give, can I gift wrap nothing and make it pretty? If I give you nothing, how can nothing take so much out of me. I will say nothing or risk one kind word or smile from you and weaken my will, because when I said I would leave before I hurt you I never thought I could. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You kind of hit the solar plexus with this one. Just -- Wow. Lots of power and lots of strength in your words -- and there is lots of sad too. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
the irony of the title and depth of this piece makes it that much more a pleasure to read. never has "nothing" said so much. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
a very powerful write... enjoyed RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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