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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

0 posted 2007-11-18 08:09 PM






Boy on the Moon

Alone, I sat,
On the mid of night moon,
Talking to the stars,
For the sun would come soon.

I watched the meteors
As they danced in the night.
I sang with the stars
“Twinkle, twinkle, so bright.”

The moon and I,
Looked upon the dark sky,
Singing a lullaby
As stars streaked by.

“Goodnight”, said the moon.
“May you have sweet dreams,
--Ofwonderful places,
And of stars and moon beams..

Star dust came upon me,
As I lifted up from the moon.
The Big Dipper scooped me,
Like a gigantic spoon.

The stars all smiled,
As I slipped off to a dream land.
My eyes were sprinkled,
With star, sleeping sand.

Asleep on my bed
Underneath mother moon,
When the bright sun rises,
I will awake soon.


GOODNIGHT
ARCTIC WIND

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2007-11-18 08:18 PM


ah so sweet,
you should write a childrens
collection of poetry.

You are very good at it!



    

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2007-11-18 08:20 PM


ARH-

WOW, why thank you!!!!!!
you are very sweet !

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-11-18 08:59 PM


Nice writing...James
Artic Wind
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4 posted 2007-11-18 09:00 PM


JamesMichael-

Thank you, i have to ask, is that your name, or middle name, and last name ?

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2007-11-18 09:15 PM


I think you would do very well writing a book for children Artic Wind.You have such lovely ideas.
                              Ida

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-11-18 09:20 PM


MarchMadness-

Why thank you, You think so
Thank you

ARCTIC WIND

HopeS
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7 posted 2007-11-18 10:31 PM


This was so sweet , I am often sat there at night with the moon and stars for company

Hope

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-11-19 02:56 PM


HopeS

thank you dear friend

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2007-11-21 07:59 PM


"Star dust came upon me,
As I lifted up from the moon.
The Big Dipper scooped me,
Like a gigantic spoon."

Arctic Wind,

I will never be able to look
at Ursa Major (the Big Dipper)
ever again, without thinking of
this poem, you dear boy!



Moon & Star Light,

EA

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2007-11-21 08:03 PM


EA

Thank you

YOUR SO NICE

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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11 posted 2007-11-24 08:28 PM



Great poem Artic Wind

Very much enjoyed, thank you.

Lindsay

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2007-11-24 08:41 PM


LinsdayP-

Thank you, !!!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
13 posted 2007-11-24 09:51 PM


Arctic... this is devine!  what a lovely story you told... thank you RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2007-11-24 09:53 PM


RDB-

thank you!!!
You are soooooo nice RDB!!!!!
and to you SWEET DREAMS

ARCTIC WIND

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