| Open Poetry #41 |
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I knew that you knew that I knew (for Jim) |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho
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there is... here and there is now no rippling tides or rumors how what ever comes will come at best we know the feces lie in rest - we can’t go back or make it right - do what gets you through the night what happens on a morrow day matters not if your away - saw the dregs you had to weigh not a clue of words relay so hapless for dear soul as I for knew you as surely I it wasn't me..! it wasn't you..! but I was truely hurt because it was likely I'd never see and I knew that you knew that I knew that Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... |
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Interloper![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting write and rhyming scheme. Write on ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale "because it was likely I'd never see and I knew that you knew that I knew that" I understand this...it hurts some. ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ Thanksgiving blessings to you and Rosemary~ This 'touches'~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
Hi Lucky -- Great take and much appreciated. I wish I had your insight to add to facility. Very best, Jim |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
it is nice of you to dedicate poems to friends ARCTIC WIND |
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hunnie_girl![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I knew that you knew that I knew that wow loved this Lucky ![]() Krysti |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I knew too! I enjoyed this read Lucky! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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