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Grieving Place
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Grieving Place |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197
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This grieving place, which you chose is an arid field where nothing grows. I'll catch your tear in my hand and deny it to the desert sand. Your tears are like a liquor sweet, brewed from your sorrow and defeat. Distilled to make a healing balm, with powers to sprout a rose in my palm. Type II poet. Its worth the work. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sheer poetry. Absolutely lovely. To roses and romance!  EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your opening lines are stunning.. Well done |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Simply beautiful! Beauty lies in the "hands" of the beholder. Naome |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I enjoyed the sad hope of this. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Tender, strong, romantic and oh so poetic. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You have touched me with the beauty of this poem. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful poem. Ida |
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