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PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07
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0 posted 2007-11-19 08:54 PM


Pain,
Muscles Tensing,
Bones Aching,
Mind Thinking,
How do I overcome physical obstacles?
Fight.
Fight.
Fight.
Don’t give out,
Out think it all,
And go through,
Don’t look back.
If you do you’ll see it all.
Right on your heels,
Accelerate through your pain.
And Fight.
Fight.
Fight.

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-19 09:00 PM


powerful

ARCTIC WIND

PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07
Posts 87

2 posted 2007-11-19 09:01 PM


Haha, seems like all my stuff is powerful to you eh?
A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2007-11-20 12:28 PM


alot of things come to mind,
fighting for love,
fighting for peace,
fighting for life,
fighting for freedom,
fighting for dignity,
fighting for respect,

fighting to be heard in a world
full of noise!

Fight your battle, be strong, in the mind...writing is strength!
~ARH

Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 387
Oregon USA
4 posted 2007-11-20 01:25 AM


"fighting to be heard in a world
full of noise!"

As they fall upon deaf ears.

Quality write.

The angst at human nature at its dullest, always brings out the best in the individual equipped with human nature.

oceanvu2
Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA
5 posted 2007-11-20 02:02 AM


Hi Preston!  Fight to what end?  For it's own sake?  Through denial?  Sometimes, I think, things really stink, and you have to deal with them on that level.

Nevertheless, fight on.  Jim

The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
Missouri
6 posted 2007-11-20 04:07 PM


hey so I read this and I think its good of course anyone with the same name as me should be good
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2007-11-20 08:24 PM


Hi, Preston! Sort of a "will over" matter scenario.

"Accelerate through your pain.
And Fight."

As the saying goes, "Grin and bear it!" Easier said than done, is it not?!?

Through persistence and perseverance, we can get past the pain.

Keep on fighting the good fight!

Giving you a comforting, healing hug,

EA


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