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Autumn Evening Rustic Red
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Autumn Evening Rustic Red |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Autumn Evening Rustic Red Burnish leaves align the lawn Intrepidly, as soft winds fawn Against the passing warbler call No, nothing more requires fall A steaming cup revives my eyes Allowed to focus each surprise The air turns hue of rustic red No, nothing more remains unsaid These hands at rest take in repose Each dampened breath to shadow blows As if by rite, the seasons praise No, nothing more left long to days ‘Neath blanket gray, the night will come Then taken stock all weight and sum A lingered look takes heart and soul No, nothing more requires fall Copyright Kkh 11/19/07 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
beautiful Poem ARCTIC WIND |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
perfect flow, and well said. me likey |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The title brought me in on this one, my friend, but you , you kept me here with your wonderful words....enjoyed this so much. jimmy |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this poem is written in a tone of the poet at peace with what is timely and seasonal. very much enjoyed here by this reader |
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Bleeding Ink Junior Member
since 2007-11-12
Posts 31 |
Bravo, just beautiful! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I enjoyed this romp in the leaves with you, TD!  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Against the passing warbler call No, nothing more requires fall" I enjoyed this seasonal moment, TD. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD, there is something so special about your poetry. ~ Correction, there are MANY things that are special about your poetry! ~ and as you can see by the comments that your readers have written, I am not alone in that assumption!  Another calming, gracious penning ~ and highly descriptive! Loving hug, EA |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
very pretty. I love fall, it's my second favorite season (I'm always longing for spring though...especially when there's snow outside, like today). Warm feelings here to fight the cold weather. "Hey, it's me, I'm dynamite and I don't know why" -- Van Morrison, 'Sweet Thing' |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! More! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A great write so much enjoyed You have painted a real life Picture. Lindsay |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Hello my friend how have you been a comment you lend a smile you reap then a dash of cheer to blend a sprinkle of joy to mend two parts love made ya grin a snow flake of peace thrown in Its the holiday brew from me to you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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