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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-11-18 06:47 AM


Come Back Soon My Sweetheart

Seems like a long time
since she went away,
and clearly I miss her.
Someday she will return
and someday she will stay,
and dearly I miss her.
Those days we were together
were so much better
than these days
we spend apart.
Come back soon
my sweetheart.

JamesLee
17November
2007

  

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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-18 09:37 AM


Hopefully soon

ARCTIC WIND

vandana
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2 posted 2007-11-18 12:30 PM


good read
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-11-18 01:38 PM


Thank you Artic Wind and vandana for the nice responses...James
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-11-18 04:02 PM


Some believe, "Out of sight ~ out of mind."

While for others it is, "Absence makes the heart grow fonder."

I believe you are one for whom the latter is true. I hope that be the case for her, as well!


Linda

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5 posted 2007-11-18 06:25 PM


understanding this
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-11-19 05:22 AM


Thank you Earth Angel and Bleeding Ink for the wonderful responses...
Earth Angel I truly hope her heart also grows fonder...you gave me an idea for a write...James

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