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Escape |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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I can't escape this Hell, No matter how loud I stand here and yell. Thoughts consume the mind, Running foward, backward or blind. So what if you can see the dark inside of me? You're not the only one with a quiet plea. So many times I've lied, But there's still rage inside. Escape isn't a need it's a must, Something to hunger for and lust. So what if you can see the dark inside of me? Pain without love can make you see. I'm still caged inside, So many times I've tried. To get through this nightmare, Sit back watch and give me a cold dead stare. I can't control myself, So what if you can see, The DARKEST side of me? I can't escape this Hell. Unseen shadows are often the best things that could have been yours |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
wow, VERY POWERFUL i enjoyed this poem, about dark sides ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Kyle! A snowflake could melt in that kind of living hell! Perhaps it would be prudent of you to open up a window or two, and let the sun shine in!  You certainly can pack a punch with your powerful poetry!  EA |
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