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November Frost
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November Frost |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 November Frost Cold winds Blow trees that have lost, Leaves from the fall, By November frost. Snowflakes falling From the heavenly sky, For winter is coming And to fall we say good-bye. Frosted rooftops And chimney frozen cold, Hot drinks are made Hot cider is sold *-*-*-*-*-*-* Lying in bed So soft and warm, Cuddling a blanket Till bright sunny morn. Windows frosted By cold morning breeze. Off to school I go, I had a little sneeze. Crystal clear skies, Not a cloud in sight. The sun is shining, Ever so bright. Cold winds Blow trees that have lost, Leaves from the fall By November frost. |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
This was very nice! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Fromme2u thank you !!!!!!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
very nice poem. November Frost penned by an arctic wind. I liked it. Gumpy Heartbroken |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Crystal clear skies, Not a cloud in sight. The sun is shining, Ever so bright. Cold winds Blow trees that have lost, Leaves from the fall By November frost. Ah those bright cold days when we can breathe, but have to walk quickly to get warm. Beautiful, dear Arctic Wind! Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
gumpy- thank you so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- thank you dear friend! ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is nice to circle a poem as you did. What is nicer, indeed, is to know why someone liked a poem. You open up the imagery very well. I got a little side-tracked with your sneeze; but a cold day could bring them off, well enough. I enjoyed your efforts, AW. Thank you! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
"In spite of a sneeze"....this might work better...sort of smooth's out the two lines ...good effort. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Artic Wind, you have captured a memory of my as I grew up in Ohio where November usually bit pretty hard. Stay warm and enjoy that cider! ......jo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
sunshine- Thank you, but i struggled lol anyways, its a cold day! I have sneezes all the time lol Have a nice day sunshine !  ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Oh thank you magnus I will take anything to improve my writing ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
iliana- thank you, and yes, i love November ARCTIC WIND |
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PrestonThePoet Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 87 |
A lot of nostalgia involved in this poem It made me smile the whole way down. It really made me bring back some of the memories i have, and love as a child. I honestly thank you for this poem. I greatly enjoyed it and gave me time to slow down, and enjoy what i was given, and will always have. Greatly Enjoyed. "Powerful Words" Preston |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, I most certainly understand working on it.  November brings breeze sometimes pollen and sneezes OH, for a huge freeze! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
PrestonThe Poet Thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sunshine- thank you, that is way better lol ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A lovely November poetic treat! The crisp, cold air ~ I breathed it in and I savored the images that you word painted.  Some hot cider sounds pretty good to me right now! Perhaps your Mom could make you a thermos of it that you could sip on your way to school! Have a happy November! EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea- wow, thank you, havent seen this poem in a while lol ARCTIC WIND |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Just a few minutes ago, I left a park with century old trees. The ground was even, covered with crunching leaves under my feet. The smell of smoke from campfires and chimneys drifted into my car as I drove home. Your poem reminds me of the transition we face in Ohio between Summer and Winter. Very much enjoyed your imagery... misce' |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
misce- Thank you, I love November sites ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely Arctic Wind.. here, for me, it's coming into summer and just between you and me... I'm so glad about that - definitely a summer gal this one! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
RDB- really, I am a winter\spring guy, i love spring and love the coldness and beauty of winter ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I just came back from a little jaunt down to the mailbox, and while I was breathing in the crisp November air, snowflakes fell down from a clear blue sky! ~ No clouds! Where did the snow come from! Then I thought of your lovely poem, and you had snow falling from clear, blue skies! I just had to come back and read your poem again! Love to you, AW EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
oh ea thats sound nice, I love to walk in november down to a park ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great poem Arctic Wind, it makes winter much more bearable especially with that idea of a cosy blanket to keep you warm. Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
LinsdayP- why thank you! winter is my fav season lol ARCTIC WIND |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
winter and fall are my favorite seasons, I love to sit in front of the fireplace, with a cozy blanket and drink hot chocolate (Swiss miss brand) with Mallow Cream..not just tiny marshmellows LOL!    You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 I liked this one..you can see the snow falling outside the windows! You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ARH- Why thank you, what lovely pictures ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ARH- Again, lovely pictures ARCTIC WIND |
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