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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were feeling better music the slow easy kind that slips over the head and swallows the want to places I pushed all the buttons on your juke box called maybe for more than a lifetime full size the keep me awake sleepy kind and you asked about my eyes why they had always wanted to be the first ones to know you and how you made love even before the man of me could climb into your branches and take my kite dreams down you kept your strings attached and just let me tug you lovely, often ___________ daark |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great peace! I love this: "I pushed all the buttons on your juke box called maybe"! .......jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Me thinks that you need to be given a special award for being the most incredible smile maker to have ever blessed the earth......cuz darn mister,  you sure know how to make people smile. You bring such happy thoughts with your poetry.  Love this, D. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you kept your strings attached and just let me tug you lovely, often" this stood out, and touched...  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
even before the man of me could climb into your branches and take my kite dreams down you kept your strings attached and just let me tug you lovely, often ----- This poem certainly tugs at me. I love it and I love the last lines that I pasted above. My word artist friend -- thank you for the wonderful. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Very nice. Boy can you paint a picture without drawing athing. Great piece. Gumpy Heartbroken |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
oh ... that climbing into your branches creates an enchanted and enchanting vision. Your poetic resources are infinite. Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...lovely, often... Smiling... greatly. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
iliana ms, thank you so much __________ ms Gs, thank you lady friend ____________ ms suesea, thanks to you for your eyes ___________ ms az, thanks babe ____________ james thank you so much ____________ gumpy, thank you friend ___________ ms mar, you bless me so often, thank you _________ ms sun, you smile me lady friend |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmm... more please Mr Daark! wonderful RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
artic friend, thank you for the read and reply ___________ ms R & B thank you lady for your eyes on my words |
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