Open Poetry #41 |
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It hurt's me so |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
It hurts me so to think of this Your lips and mine not meant to kiss It hurts me so to think that we A love so strong not meant to be And even though it hurts me so I hold our love and won't let go. Gumpy Heartbroken |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Sad ARCTIC WIND |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Yes, it's sad but ... maybe by letting go, we find what is right for us. Lovely poem. Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can remember at least one time when I let go because it was tormenting me, and I weighed the torment and thought that it would be less if I let go...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This with a dozen red roses might work......jo |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Thank you all for your words, they mean a lot. Heartbroken |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Those who are gentle, loving, sensitive, and tender-heart, hurt the most when they are not loved as deeply as they love. I pray that your sadness will lessen and be replaced with happiness. Perhaps by the ending of one relationship, you will be freed up for a new love to come into your life. Loving, comforting, hug, EA ![]() |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Thank you Angel. Your words mean much and I look forward to seeing them. Thank you. Gumpy Heartbroken |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
And even though it hurts me so I hold our love and won't let go. sad words here... but I think there is a message that says... "I'm going to love you forever" ... that in itself is beautiful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow this was really good, It was so beautiful, such strong words ![]() Krysti |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Thank you Roniece. You're right it does, I do, and I will continue to. Thank you Heartbroken |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Thank you hunnie_girl. I appreciate you taking the time to read and reply. Many thank u's Heartbroken |
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