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Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
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Belfast, Ireland

0 posted 2007-11-13 02:29 PM


Whatever is started must one day come to an end
That too includes the days themselves
Time even with the bravest efforts will never bend
We are helplessly finite within ourselves
Our lives are too precious a commodity to waste
Doing so would be a tragic crime
There are too many great experiences to taste
So listen to farther time


© Copyright 2007 Brian Rooney - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-11-13 03:47 PM


Enjoyed...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2007-11-13 04:59 PM


Yes our lives are precious I agree, but I believe we dance through infinity, beyond time and space.

Thoughtful piece.

Love,
Margherita

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