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Your Wilted Resplendency
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Your Wilted Resplendency |
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Arkarian New Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 9 |
I’ve laid myself before you Praying somehow this will stop Crying at your feet all day I’m dying dropp by drop Asking for forgiveness As I’m fading in and out All I have is sorrow And the shadow of a doubt I doubt how much you love me And I doubt you really care I’m falling into darkness And I doubt I’ll see you there The cold is all around me As I’m crying out your name The fear wells up inside me But it’s chilling just the same My legs give out beneath me As I’m struggling to stand The darkness pulls me deeper As I let go of your hand I fight off all the demons But you send me more to bear I’m crying all the harder Though you’ve never made it fair The loneliness you gave me I am leaving far behind I stumble slowly forward As I push you from my mind <td width="20" valign="top" style="color:#B2B7F2;font-size:40px;font-family:serif;font-weight:bold;text-align:left;padding:10px 10px;">“</td |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: ... and soon you will soar again. Just when I thought this was simply too dark, you surprised me with the uplifting end. Good job. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice flow of thoughts...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love to express thoughts ARCTIC WIND |
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