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Open Poetry #41

The One In A Million

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-11-13 09:57 AM

I met you when I was half-way to nowhere;
I followed my heart, and I was not mistaken -
Each time I fell, you made me rise,
And you did guide me,
As my eyes were blind.
You were the shield for me, forsaken,
The only one to care.
And I would give a world to
Have lived through all that twice.

You opened my heart to true love,
So genuine, not known before;
Unlocked it and set me free,
Accepting that I was just me,
Impersoning that perfect guise
Of the one I'd been searching for
All my life... You're the one in a million...

Your heart is the candle of my hope,
So let it be the cradle of my love...
And only in your arms
It would feel like home.
Forgive me for the words
That weren't said on time,
For having lied to you,
When I did only lie... to myself.
And all: your tears on my pillow,
Your nightmares that I have
Like they are mine,
Your burden on my shoulders
Hurt more as love is growing older,
But for this all, I'd never see the light.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-11-13 05:10 PM

quote:
You opened my heart to true love,
So genuine, not known before;
Unlocked it and set me free,
Accepting that I was just me,

Very lovely declaration.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-11-13 06:30 PM

"But for this all, I'd never see the light." James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-13 06:40 PM

Lovely, as Margherita said, i seriously Think so my self

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-11-13 06:43 PM

"Your heart is the candle of my hope,
So let it be the cradle of my love..."

~ What a lovely thought.

Yes, on reading your poem of love and gratitude, he certainly does sound like he's "one in a million". I am happy for you ~ and for him!

~ May the candle flame burn on forever!

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