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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Last Words My whole world is crumbling, rapidly falling apart, as if someone that I love drove a sword through my heart. I'm bleeding profusely, my life ebbing away, last words escape my lips "I love you, even upon my dying day." JamesLee 09November 2007 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-10-2007 12:44 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear James, this is very intense ... your heart in need to express this love so great that it will last into eternity. Well done! Love, Margherita  |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
WOW. "My whole world is crumbling, rapidly falling apart, as if someone that I love drove a sword through my heart." I know your pain. To put it in writing stems the flow a little. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James... my friend... are you ok? RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice write James. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
very beautifully written James I really enjoy your words  Krysti |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Margherita, Roniece, Gumpy, JL and hunnie_girl for the wonderful responses... Roniece I'm alright, I have to make some hard choices, none of which I am thrilled about...James |
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