Open Poetry #41 |
Believe it or not |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Ready, steady, go, and she tumbles into soul a stranger to the diocese of the most beautiful unable to assimilate the meaning and intent of her sink into the feel of the newly attuned. But this merge of soul a “get to know you” stage that filters to the brain of one inclined to know and she of mortal leanings must undergo a shift to comfortably embrace this different approach to the finding and the keeping of amazing grace. She squirms in the heat of a previous belief burning like a body set upon a pyre but bows to the known so long in strangulation of soul’s innate wildness in her need to return to a cooler state. Cool for a minute, an hour, day, week, but determined flames soon reappear and burn away the vestiges of outdated beliefs that held the love of soul a not so splendid thing. Now cornered in the knowing a merge will always bring she suffers like insomniacs the absence of peace but well she knows her lifetime is only a moment away from loving you. Believe it or not, understand it or not, but there is one who knows! Helen / 10 November 2007 www.dreamtimepoetry.com [This message has been edited by Honeybunch (11-10-2007 06:32 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Honey! Sounds as though she is getting her wings! Off with the old dogma and on with the spiritual attunement! Is "the one who knows" ~ THE ONE who knows? Love & God's Light, Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Oh my, oh my, dear Helen! You have outdone yourself with this one I would say!! There is ONE who knows no doubt ... Deeply captivating and so beautifully written! Love, Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Now cornered in the knowing a merge will always bring she suffers like insomniacs the absence of peace but well she knows her lifetime is only a moment away from loving you." Such enthusiasm in the suffering in absence of peace,yet the reward of that love for the persistence will be an adequate fulfillment. Dynamic write, enjoyed this very much. Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Linda, Margherita, and JL - Thank you so much for your comments. Words do relieve the "pressure" somewhat but I guess one still cries out in the night, the day, or just any old time when feeling the heat. Thanks again! Helen |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Helen but well she knows her lifetime is only a moment away from loving you. How I love those two lines! I hope you are well...I've missed you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, I had been missing reading you and I went search. I was delighted to read this....wow! I hope your days are full of grace and love. .....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, Jo. Lovely to see you here. I'm just "sleeping" though some would call it "working" but thank you for pulling me back here. I'll never catch up on the poems posted in my absence which I know is my loss. Hope you are well. One can miss the blue pages so much but I'm sure I'll wake up once the nighmare has passed - the nighmare of "life" but isn't that a good thing because we know we will wake up eventually. Hugs Helen |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I've been in the same place, Helen. It's pretty much been just this week that I have posted a little. Be well, my friend. Luv ya.......jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"'m sure I'll wake up once the nighmare has passed - the nighmare of "life" but isn't that a good thing because we know we will wake up eventually." so true, Helen. I have missed your words and hope you are well~~ M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are certainly in fine form this morn....what a stunning write...you are a languid sea of words, wisely rolling them all together into visuals that define life and all it's trials and tribulations, along with the magical moments and knowing what we have is simply the offspring of some spiritual meaning.... hugs to you |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Terrific write, my friend...both times I read it. Jwesley |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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Lincoln Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 62Earth |
loved it |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The growth in this is splendid, Helen... and the woman doesn't even need to roar... a quiet takeover, for sure. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for reading and for commenting. I guess our "heroine" in the story has tumbled onto shaky ground but she'll find her feet again one day, some day, before the story ends. |
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